The part of the sentence "with particular attention paid to" is a correct and usable phrase in written English. You can use it to emphasize that special emphasis should be placed on a certain point. For example, "We must review all the data, with particular attention paid to the results from the recent survey.".
Crews and vessels are rigorously regulated, with particular attention paid to emergency equipment.
They discussed French food, underwater explorers and sea life, with particular attention paid to shark genitalia.
Whatever they were, he treated both men and women, although with "particular attention paid to all afflictions of ladies".
Instead, the film pitched daylight robbery against a blinding white tundra – film blanc – with particular attention paid to the way the Minnesota winter obliterates the horizon line.
This evening, that strategy took the form of an opening song about the Olympics, with particular attention paid to equestrian dressage.
We learn that most nights, the Grants ate dinner in front of the "telly," with particular attention paid to Andy Rooney's segment on "60 Minutes".
Perhaps his most important book, Let History Judge (1971), is a comprehensive historical study of Stalinism, with particular attention paid to that movement's origins and consequences.
Thanks to Ludwig my first paper got accepted! The editor wrote me that my manuscript was well-written
Listya Utami K.
PhD Student in Biology, Bandung Institute of Technology, Indonesia