The phrase 'incorporating the comments' is correct and usable in written English. You can use it to describe a situation when you have taken comments into consideration and applied them in order to improve something. For example: "After incorporating the comments from the feedback survey, we have come up with a new policy.".
The final document, incorporating the comments and discussion generated at the council meeting, was completed in March.
"In retrospect," he said, it would have been better to explain what had happened — that an aide had incorporated the comments — a day earlier.
Thomas A. Fanning, Southern's chairman, said in a conference call with reporters that the company would "incorporate the comments of everybody and every event along the way, to assure that we have the safest, most reliable generation in the world built here at Plant Vogtle".
In addition, feedback on the case studies was received from all countries and was taken seriously on the part of the respondents; the authors appreciated and incorporated the comments.
We have made changes to the manuscript to incorporate the comments of the 3 reviewers.
JC wrote the first draft of the article and incorporated the comments from RC, JET and EE who reviewed the draft article twice.
To avoid confusion and also to incorporate the comments below, we have modified the title to, "Differential effects of light and feeding on circadian organization of peripheral clocks in a forebrain Bmal1 mutant" and emphasized "light/dark cycles" in the revised manuscript.
Thanks to Ludwig my first paper got accepted! The editor wrote me that my manuscript was well-written
Listya Utami K.
PhD Student in Biology, Bandung Institute of Technology, Indonesia