The part of the sentence 'would appreciate it very much if you could' is correct and usable in written English. You can use this phrase in friendly requests or as a polite way to beg someone to do something. For example: I would really appreciate it very much if you could pick up my mail while I'm away on vacation.
We would appreciate it very much if you could help us spread the love so it catches on with other schools, businesses and communities.
"I would appreciate it very much if you would correct the statement attributed to me in your issue of Jan . 29th
By Cole Porter The New Yorker, February 12 , 1949P. 83 "I would appreciate it very much if you would correct the statement attributed to me in your issue of Jan . 29th
I would appreciate it very much if you would please answer this and explain to me why people are classed as animals.
I would appreciate it very much if you would write me a fairly complete statement of your views as one of the outstanding art historians and critics in the country.
"I would appreciate it very much if it could be sent to me as there is a great deal of sentiment attached to it," she wrote.
I'd appreciate it very much".
We really appreciate it very much, Tim Apple.
JC: Mike, I appreciate it very much.
They will appreciate it very much.
I would appreciate very much if you could elaborate.
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