The phrase "which draws attention" is grammatically correct and is commonly used in written English.
It can be used to refer to any action, object, or aspect of a sentence that captures or directs someone's focus. Here are some examples: 1. The bright red dress, which draws attention to her curves, was the perfect choice for the gala. 2. The headline of the newspaper, which draws attention to the latest political scandal, caused outrage among the public. 3. The bold font used in the advertisement, which draws attention to the limited time offer, enticed customers to make a purchase. 4. The intricate details on the painting, which draws attention to the artist's skill, made it a masterpiece. 5. The loud siren, which draws attention to potential danger, warned the residents to evacuate the building.
In April, Verizon created a YouTube video, "Tips for Traveling Overseas," which draws attention to its global data plans and the automated alerts it sends when roaming charges exceed certain thresholds.
Swampy also upstages its hometown of Christmas, which draws attention to itself with a perpetually decorated tree and other Yuletide-theme attractions, but has a tough time trumping a 200ft-long alligator.
I have never before read in a British newspaper an account, such as this one, which draws attention to the realities of the Indonesian government's actions in West Papua and the damage this is doing to the indigenous population.
An Obama campaign attack ad which draws attention to Romney's work at private equity firm Bain Capital has come under fire from some unlikely corners, but in an era of limitless "super PAC" funding, it's unlikely to be the last of its kind.
In considering the U.N.'s performance, we must also consider the valuable role of the Office of the High Commissioner on Human Rights, which draws attention to the challenges inherent in advancing human rights and recommends solutions to overcome violations throughout the world.
The one criticism I would level, echoing to some extent what Martin and Mike have said, is that it is a bit heavy on weather anecdotes (this record broken here; that record there), which draws attention away from the central issue of the statistics of extremes.
Rotation-based propulsion creates unfavorable acoustic noise, which draws attentions from underwater creatures and thus leads to unfaithful data for their habitat study.
thiooxidans [ 28], showed high copper recoveries, which draws attentions in this field.
The task has assumed more urgency since the Asian crisis, which drew attention to the perils of lax accounting.
Superior Ink supplanted one of the last factories in the area, which drew attention to the project from the start.
The first was Silent Spring by Rachel Carson, which drew attention to the harmful effect of pesticides such as DDT on the environment, and especially bird life.
