"when mentioning that" is a correct and common part of a sentence in written English.
It is typically used when introducing or providing additional information about a topic that has been mentioned previously in the sentence or conversation. Example: When mentioning that I needed a ride to the airport, my friend offered to give me a lift in her car.
Jon Caramanica, when mentioning that Brady Seals of Hot Apple Pie is a cousin of Jim Seals, refers to the duo Seals and Crofts as "70's schlock-poppers" ["The Cover Video," Directions, last Sunday].
Luke Walton gave a wry chuckle when mentioning that one after Wednesday's practice, a nod to players' bad luck lately.
But on Tuesday, in announcing his tax reform plan, he used it once, when mentioning that he would reduce spending at the Department of Energy.
In the third paragraph, when mentioning that the PHiD-CV vaccine is a worth-while alternative to the pneumococcal conjugate vaccine PCV13, the authors should add: … in children younger than 5 years of age.
I have only minor comments: In the second paragraph, when mentioning that the PHiD-CV vaccine is currently licensed in more than 125 countries, the authors should make clear that the vaccine is licensed for active immunization against invasive disease, pneumonia, and acute otitis media (AOM) caused by S. pneumoniae in infants and young children up to 5 years of age.
In the second paragraph, when mentioning that the PHiD-CV vaccine is currently licensed in more than 125 countries, the authors should make clear that the vaccine is licensed for active immunization against invasive disease, pneumonia, and acute otitis media (AOM) caused by S. pneumoniae in infants and young children up to 5 years of age.
But remember when I mentioned that you're expected to write your code through Hackermeter's built-in code editor?
We were talking when he mentioned that one of his buddies and a girl from their class were dating.
When I mentioned that song, McKenzie laughed.
When I mentioned that, she snapped, "Thank you very much".
Goldstone sounds almost gleeful when he mentions that scenario.
