The part of the sentence "was revised to be" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it to indicate that something has changed from a previous version. For example: "The original design of the building was revised to be slightly larger in size."
The item was revised to be inclusive of both male and female preferences for gender of health care provider.
On March 13, Mw was revised to be 9.0 by CMT analysis using a longer range of filter (Hirose et al., 2011).
Asperity II of the slip model was revised to be less severe so that the simulated and observed waveforms and PGA were well matched.
And then, MW was revised to be 9.0 by CMT analysis using a filter of 200 1000 s for 50-min teleseismic data because the filter of 100 300 s and waveforms of 30-min are too short for the analysis of the event.
After they were seized by the German Navy, the planned armament was revised to be standardized with new German cruisers.
If the definition of non-EBF was revised to be non-EBF before 1 month of age, there remained no association with intrauterine transmission (RH = 1.09 95% CI: 0.50 2.42), but there was a slight, non-significant, increase in intrapartum transmission (RH = 1.75 95% CI: 0.89 3.44) suggesting a small proportion of postnatal transmission may have been misclassified as intrapartum.
Her classmate, Jenna Adymy, is less enthusiastic because of the changes in campus policies affecting parking and visitation, which are being revised to be consistent with the residential life policies at Fordham.
Overall, the data suggest conceptualizations of pathological social anxiety may need to be revised to be useful for studying individuals in East Asian cultures.
The interfaces between the BLV and the Beam Line Components (BLCs) have been revised to be compatible with the new vessel design and the BLCs support frames.
In this system, a tree-searching based MIMO detection algorithm is revised to be suitable for the NOC system, and the processing elements that execute the algorithm is architected.
Under the supervision of scholars largely derived from or affiliated with the JUI and JI, school and university curricula were revised to be in line with religious teachings, and capital punishments for adultery, blasphemy and apostasy were promulgated.
