All three of these pieces contain flashes of inspiration but all are in need of editing and pruning.
I think the manuscript could be shortened, and is in need of editing for language.
Smith believed that Burka's description of the latter — "the butt was tender and yielding" — was in need of some editing, but, without having to consume any critters personally, he was persuaded by Burka's report.
In the wake of this success, Miss Stimer's previously thin and shrill voice came to satisfactory terms with "If I Love Again" and an impressively simple treatment of Irving Berlin's "What'll I Do?" But they wound up with a seemingly endless medley of Burt Bacharach songs that, like much of their program, was in need of both editing and direction.
The overwhelming response was that independently published books were in need of stronger editing.
Importantly, students also tested computationally predicted gene models (introns, exons, and start/stop codons), which are often miscalled in genome-sequencing projects and are in need of empirical editing.
Like FOI and Myth, Babel is badly in need of editing: after 90 unbroken minutes of performance only Svensson emerges as a distinctive character.
"Rub Me," danced to music by Mr. Johnston, keeps Karl Anderson, Ms. Lynch-John, Mr. O'Connor and Ms. Townsend on an even shorter leash and is badly in need of editing.
The book is in need of a serious edit, especially in the opening 200 pages, but pity the poor editor who has to take a red pen to the manuscript of someone who has sold 450 million books.
To me, they are Primal Scream in need of editing; a band with a couple of nice songs that go on too long.
He criticised the length of the scenes, however, and believed they were too long and in need of editing, particularly during the film's climax.
