"What was provided to the panel," Mr. Williams said, "was both the unedited version and the version with comment".
Smith's version was prefaced with comments addressed to Patty Hearst, who had recently robbed a bank with the Symbionese Liberation Army: "I was wondering, were you getting it every night from a black revolutionary man and his women or were you really dead?" An autobiographical prose poem, "Piss Factory," was on the B side.
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In 1995, Robert Henderson, the chief engineer for the Manhattan Project, sent back to Coster-Mullen an early version of the "Atom Bombs" manuscript, with comments such as "shit" and "pure shit," and then went on to explain the exact (and still classified) process by which engineers made the lens molds that cast the explosives that squeezed the core of Fat Man until it achieved critical mass.
Preliminary results were sent to the participants for member checking: nine of them responded with comments that were incorporated into the final versions of the tables.
GA-Z and RR drafted the first version of the manuscript, and WS commented on this version, with all authors helping to revise the article accordingly and generate the recommendations.
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After the original version of "Revolver" leaked onto the net, Daniel Kreps from Rolling Stone commented that "this cleaned-up version with its sirenesque synths is more befitting of the Queen of Pop".
After the meeting, each study participant was asked to compare the draft of the IT-ID-CM with the original version and provide comments and suggestions.
However, participants also found the paper version easy (16 comments) and quick to complete (9 comments).
