Sentence examples for use some editing from inspiring English sources

Could the show use some editing?

His definition of "freedom" could use some editing.

"This Beautiful City" could use some editing too.

Herbalife's terminology, Mr. Johnson says, could use some editing.

The videos could use some editing with an eye to eliminating the lamer jokes.

Like "The Hunt," "Annuals" could use some editing, but it is far less clearly defined than Mr. Battle's piece.

The suite of dances could have used some editing.

The dance could have used some editing, but the conceits were scorchingly to the point, as was the performing, by Mr. Mosley, Kristin Ogozaly, Richard Ayres and Lanileigh Ting.

Re Parsing Goree's Speech," by William Safire (column, Aug. 21), about Al Gore's acceptance speech at the Democratic National Convention: Mr. Safire is missing the zeitgeist when he says that Mr. Gore could have used some editing to make his words more memorable.

While the book could use some major editing, it nevertheless leaves out vital information.

Concentrating on painting and sculpture, the exhibition is not trendy or controversial and it could use some more editing.