The phrase "update offer" is grammatically correct and can be used in written English.
It is commonly used in the context of business or sales to refer to making changes or improvements to a product or service offer. Example: We would like to inform you that our company has updated our offer for our new line of products, with better features and competitive pricing.
Because Microsoft's revenue in this area is largely driven by new purchases, Microsoft doesn't expect the end of the free update offer to have a markable influence on next quarter's results.
Picking August 2nd as the launch date is a bit of an odd choice, though, given that Microsoft's free update offer, which allows most current Windows users to update to Windows 10 for free, expires just a few days earlier on July 29th and Microsoft doesn't seem to have any intention to extend this offer beyond this date.
Paris Update offers the cerebral alternative, with longer, newspaper-style previews.
Photo-sharing app Snapchat made its name through the introduction of self-destructing messages, but its latest update offers a more permanent way to share with friends.
| With five works, "Automatic Update" offers only a small sampling of familiar artists who employ recent technology — it's hardly the "update" of the genre that the title implies.
Finally, the Windows 8 update offers a new Home Screen which includes the personalized Feed as on iPhone, daily deals and more.
Unlike iOS, there's no public beta for Watch software so, unless you're a developer, you won't have seen the improvements the update offers.
The software update offers a "completely redesigned" media player, one that will likely take some getting used to for those who have been using iTunes 10 for the past couple years.
The Medical Research Council's (MRC) framework for the development and evaluation of complex interventions and its update offers guidance for researchers covering the phases development, feasibility/piloting, and evaluation.
The updates offer a more consistent experience across mobile devices and the Web.
Reading between the lines somewhat in the Post article, the enhancements in this updated offer to Iran are to be back-loaded.
