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(Headlessness was not mentioned until the third paragraph; toplessness not at all).
He tactfully waits until the third paragraph — journalists call this "burying the lead" — to deliver the most devastating blow yet to human self-esteem.
The next day, the Times played Patrick's fourth-place finish on the front page — the first time Indy had made the front in twenty-four yeand — andididn't mention Wheldon until the third paragraph.
The next day, the Times played Patrick's fourth-place finish on the front page the first time Indy had made the front in twenty-four years—andididn't mention Wheldon until the third paragraph.
This proved true in the case of the Associated Press bulletin on his death, but the Washington Post waited until the third paragraph.
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By LP Maxa "I had been to Boo Radley's several times but never made the connection until I found the name in the second paragraph of To Kill a Mockingbird.
Harri said that the letter from Gladwin was entitled Global Day of Prayer and did not mention Lewis until the sixth paragraph.
Not until the fifth paragraph did the reader learn that the headline was false, that the E. coli found in the mushrooms was not E. coli 0157 H7, which is deadly, but the generic variety, which is not.
The fact that Citigroup was pulling 1,600 technology jobs out of the still-wounded precincts of Lower Manhattan and sending them to a corporate campus in Warren, N.J., did not even come up until the seventh paragraph of a nine-paragraph mayoral news release.
In addition to serving as a reminder of the prose that made Krakauer famous, it's a miniature master class in writerly craft, beginning with a skillful intro — in media res to the point that the date doesn't appear until the seventh paragraph — and deviating from strict chronology more than one might anticipate.
Michael Getler, The Post's ombudsman -- a columnist charged with examining the paper's own coverage -- noted in a column on April 20 that the article on the Lynch capture waited until the fourth paragraph to raise cautions about the preliminary nature of what it called "battlefield intelligence".
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