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The climactic fight between Hannah and Marnie is staged dully, acted with an ordinary petulance, and concludes with a painfully trite touch.
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It was true: the speech was trite and, but for a few personal touches, generic.
The fact that "Passengers" and "Collateral Beauty" open within a week of each other is coincidental, but imagine aliens touching down and seeing these trite dramas' titles emblazoned across theater marquees.
But Hannon and Edmundson's show is a rare thing: a musical that touches the heart without relying on trite formulas and proves substantial enough to have warranted such a swift revival.
But these surrealist touches cannot really disguise the fundamentally conventional — at times trite — nature of the play.
He also assaults the convention of poetic metaphor, as in the second example above — the gray salmon named Flint — revealing that a lot of allegedly "poetic" writing is a fraudulent and circular game: language that is supposed to evoke the natural world and put readers in touch with their inner being is in fact recycling its own trite conventions.
Trite stuff.
Trite dialogue.
Too trite.
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