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Enjoyable enough, but too much exposition.
Dear god, this is simply too much exposition.
In some sections there was too much exposition.
The dialogue is wooden and often freighted with too much exposition.
It has too much exposition, too many dull courtiers, too many unfunny clowns.
It was giving too much of the main thing prematurely, just too much exposition of his obsession at this point.
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But somehow the sense of peril is downplayed, diluted by too much inert exposition and pacing that could be tighter.
But there is far too much clumsy exposition, as when a friend tells Corrine: "As long as I can remember, she was a real problem.
And even if van der Leun is less interesting as an ingénue or as a historian — there is too much detached exposition — she is deeply compelling as a sleuth and social observer.
Too much confused exposition is left to the final reel, and the downbeat ending will be familiar to admirers of Joseph Losey's early-1960s sci-fi masterpiecerpiece, The Damned.
MsCarey has been reading, among other books, David Mitchell's Slade House, "a shortish ghost story which is very entertaining and slips down really easily": It goes a bit David Mitchellish at the end which necessitates too much clunky exposition in the dialogue but it does seem a bit churlish of me to accuse David Mitchell of being David Mitchell and I do recommend it.
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