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"They'd say these films were too wordy, too cerebral, too much dialogue," Mr. Jewison said.
For reasons he hadn't considered, Segel was advised not to write too much dialogue between Miss Piggy and Fozzie Bear.
"The Buried Giant" has far too much dialogue like this, more Monty Python than William Golding: "Your news overwhelms us, Sir Gawain. . . .
There was too much dialogue to remember in 48 hours, so initially there was a squad of people writing lines on cards – who quickly became exhausted.
And in her attempt to write something "harder" than a novel, she often glides through scenes by means of summary and exposition because, after all, too much dialogue and action take us in the direction of... fiction.
But there is way too much dialogue – any dramatic event seems to happen offstage and get relayed to us only through conversations or interior monologues, killing its potential impact.
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Johnston and Weiss manage to stitch their characters' past into their present behavior, and they act up a storm while doing it; too much expository dialogue would have left them less time to explore.
Yet the book doesn't quite achieve its intended emotional resonance; there is too much shaky dialogue and improbable Vegas kitsch (breast implants with candle-wax-filled nipples, for a pyrotechnic striptease), and the boy at the center of the plot is thinly drawn and so obnoxious that his disappearance is not unwelcome.
They tend to write in too much damn dialogue.
John Sayles' overly written drama focuses too much on dialogue and not enough on advancing the story.
There are so many really true operatic moments - but there is far too much spoken dialogue for it to be considered an opera.
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