The phrase "to be further revised" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use this phrase when you want to indicate that something needs to be improved or revised more, often through continued work or review. For example: "This document will need to be further revised before it is ready for publication."
It is not clear whether Pooh will be further revised to restore the bear's innate Britishness: Milne aficionados have long complained that a series of stories set in Ashdown Forest in Sussex was given a North American flavour by Disney, with the studio even adding a character named Gopher that was not in the books.
Ballard would habitually begin a complete draft by hand, before moving to a second, typewritten version which would be further revised by hand.
Banks and other interested parties have until Sept. 20 to comment on the guidelines, which could be further revised before the committee votes on the proposal.
Thus, the protein space and the phytochemicals identified in our study as the major players in the colon cancer interaction network, are based on the to date available information in PubMed and may be further revised in the future, as new knowledge on the medicinal properties of plants and their natural compound constituents is going to emerge.
As the "special corrector's edition" continues to circulate via the Internet, there is the possibility that it will be further revised -- perhaps even individualized.
Though the new master plan could be further revised in the environmental impact review, by most accounts it will be superior to that of the World Trade Center design of the 1970's.
Sakellarides insisted that his nation's proposals were "quickly endorsed" but would be further revised during technical talks.
The rise in the state pension age for women from 60 to 65 was further revised in the 2011 Pensions Act, making it age 65 by 2018.
The first theme on "initial screening" was further revised to "initial screening and assessment" to better reflect the first stage of discharge planning process.
This model has been further revised to show that DELLA proteins are also able to activate transcription by sequestration of inhibitors [ 36- 38].
