Sentence examples for thoughtful manuscript from inspiring English sources

The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1471-2334/13/361/prepub We acknowledge study nurse Randi Olsen (data collection), Terje Aspenes (laboratory work), Bente Træen, PHD (questionnaire design), and Henrik Schirmer, PHD (analyses and thoughtful manuscript review).

Without their careful and thoughtful assistance, this manuscript would not have been possible.

The authors would like to acknowledge Dr. Hannah Cooper for her input during the conceptualization of the study and her thoughtful review of manuscript drafts.

We thank Peter Kappeler and two anonymous reviewers for thoughtful comments on the manuscript.

We also thank Dr. Susan Kane and Ms. Anja Scholze for thoughtful comments on the manuscript.

We thank Dr. Luiz R. Travassos for discussions and the thoughtful review of the manuscript.

Ehrhart and Dr N.A. Shevchuk for critical reading of the manuscript and thoughtful discussions.

We thank Nicola Casali, University of California, Berkeley, for thoughtful comments on the manuscript.

The authors thank Eldon Ball, Graham Farquhar, Kyra Hay, Ove Hoegh-Guldberg, John Pandolfi and Ruth Reef for thoughtful comments on the manuscript and Simon Blomberg for statistical advice.

The authors thank Dr. Jesse Papenburg for his thoughtful review of this manuscript.

Special thanks to Dr. Kathryn McMillan, Dr. Victoria Morgan, and Allen Newton for thoughtful feedback on the manuscript.