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"To keep this relevant and meaningful to the characters and to the people experiencing this story, it has to feel like its of its time.
I hadn't chosen this story — it had chosen me.
There's only one problem with this story: it isn't true.
Like many parts to this story, it is frustratingly circular.
For this story, it was that cranky, percussive voice of Alma.
The reason for this story -- it doesn't only happen to you.
I have no idea when I first heard this story; it has the quality of timelessness.
Though that might strongly affect the shape of this story, it surfaces only indirectly.
In this story, it shows how hard it can be to say goodbye.
"That's the greatness of this story — it leaves us with so many questions".
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