Sentence examples for this section needs to from inspiring English sources

"This section needs to be the gem at the center of the necklace".

The computation of the standard errors for the estimates presented in this section needs to take into account both the differences in the sampling frames across countries and the variation induced by the imputation of the ability scores.

This section needs to be clarified.

I think this section needs to be more clearly written.

This section needs to be significantly expanded in the revised version of the manuscript.

I think this section needs to be expanded with more text.

The DLS for this second build section needs to be less than about 9°/100 ft in order to prevent drill pipe fatigue, but the long-radius build method employed results in the DLS value actually being less than 6°/100 ft. The tangent section-inclusive (TSI) method is applied to the design of the horizontal section of the trajectory.

In the manuscript, the Methods section needs to be adjusted to precisely reflect how this model was generated.

Also the Results section needs to provide better logical justification about the numerous experiments performed.

I also feel the discussion section needs to be further developed.

They said those sections needed to be reformed.