Fitzgerald convinced Hemingway to cut the first third of The Sun Also Rises, vastly improving the manuscript; here Hotchner has Hemingway admitting that Fitzgerald similarly improved his classic short story "Fifty Grand": it "was damned good," Fitzgerald said, "but would be better if I shucked the first page and started on page two … the story had more muscle that way".
According to a note on the manuscript: Here begins the Gospel Dice which Dub Innse, bishop of Bangor, brought from the English king, that is from the household of Æthelstan, King of England, drawn by a certain Franco [or Frank] and by a Roman scholar, that is Israel.
In addition to the principal evaluation criteria, the reviewers are asked to give a final publication recommendation: "Do you recommend acceptance of the manuscript?" Here, the response categories are: (1) yes, without alterations, (2) yes, after minor alterations, (3) yes, after major alterations, and (4) no.
We have decided to address this issue in a more nuanced fashion elsewhere (Szathmáry and Rodin, in preparation); however, the reviewer's remarks led us to restoring the original paragraph of the manuscript here, in the present discussion.
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But reports that Mr. Carroll wrote his famous manuscript here cannot be true, as the author died in 1898 and the house was not built until 1905.
As usual he has seized on that opportunity to make mischief: rather than publish his original manuscript here, he intends to have someone else render the French translation back into Spanish.
What better reason could there be for submitting your manuscript here?
Table 5 for this manuscript is published here: The citation for Table 5 should have appeared on p. 264, " Sensitivity analyses.
