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John and Savannah are too thinly drawn to sustain a great love story.
But it's not terribly involving because the characters are too thinly drawn.
That this once popular work has fallen into neglect likely stems from characters too thinly drawn to be relatable.
But several Pearl regulars pounce on their ostensibly supporting roles with unseemly zeal, and Mr. Goodman fails to bring a third dimension to his (admittedly thinly drawn) role.
Mr. Oliveras, who wrote the film, settles for boilerplate dialogue and thinly drawn characters at times (especially Carter's father, who seems unrealistically indifferent and callous toward his son).
It was no great surprise that Scott's character ended up being a bad guy but the connection to Spectre and Blofeld was thinly drawn.
And yet there's little innocent about "Jonas," a blithe, thinly drawn, thus far unfunny show seeded with profound cynicism befitting a much older band.
Despite thinly drawn characters and a predictable order of fatalities (look out, socially awkward nerd!), "Severance" is a lively romp through terrain less traveled than you might think.
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