The performances of that work - the original score from 1930 and the substantial revision made 17 years later, both using material from Prokofiev's ballet The Prodigal Son - are two of the undisputed successes in what turns out to be a rather uneven series.
The changes adopted by the Judicial Conference of the United States represent the most substantial revision of the class-action rules since the modern class-action lawsuit came into being in 1966.
All of the authors made substantial revisions to the intellectual content of the manuscript and approved the final version.
The workbook underwent substantial revisions before the second offering (see Supplemental Material 2).
JES assisted with the design of the study, drafted the manuscript, and made substantial revisions to the final manuscript.
EG helped design the study, and acquire and interpret the data, supervised the publication and made substantial revisions to the article drafts, and gave final approval for publication.
CCL participated in literature review, study design, data management, data analysis, interpretation of the data, drafting the manuscript and substantial revisions.
GSM assisted with the design of the study and made substantial revisions to the final manuscript.
The present version of the manuscript requires substantial revisions.
TLC participated in the literature review, drafting the manuscript, data management, interpretation of the data, and substantial revisions.
