Sentence examples for the script notes that from inspiring English sources

But it also belies her writer's mind, which never shut off and was already working in her early 20s, when she made the script notes that ended up as final dialogue in The Empire Strikes Back.

The script notes that the ensuing silence between Johnson and his aides is "heavy with irony".

In "The Lady and the Tiger", she immediately dislikes Amanda (played by Elizabeth Gracen) and the script notes that "...sparks fly between the two women".

David Duchovny stated that "I didn't understand the plot, but I liked the script", noting that Carter and his team improved a weak teleplay and director Kim Manners "did an excellent job".

The Cormac McCarthy-penned script notes that Malkina is Argentinian, yet the movie changed her roots to Barbados.

Also clear was his impatience with a dispute that erupted last year when an anonymous letter popped up in the case, with attachments that appeared to be e-mails and script notes that seemed to make the Benays' case.

When writing Sanosuke's dialogue, Clark Cheng, the writer of the English dub script, noted that the character was smarter than he would have liked in the first few episodes, so Cheng tried slowly to change the character's dialogue to make Sanosuke seem less intelligent so he would be more similar to the equivalent in the Japanese version of the series.

Develin does roll back some of his criticism in a final post script, noting that "We don't really think Princeton or the world's air supply is going anywhere soon.

Again, from the script notes: We've also found that it's useful to remember that the actors... are not bad actors but the victims of unfortunate circumstance.

Writer Brian Helgeland helped with the character development and dialogue of the script based on the notes that came out of those discussions with Jolie and to accompany the gender change, the title character's name was changed to Evelyn Salt.

He didn't tell me much about the script, beyond noting that the male protagonist is a human and the female protagonist is an animal.