Their script was subsequently rewritten by Maurice Hurley, whose first effort was poorly received; however, his rewritten version was filmed.
It, too, was leaked to the press, where it was widely criticized, and as a result the rewritten, final version was less confrontational.
It was the rewritten version, with Page Black's voice and image, that became ubiquitous on the airwaves in the New York region in the 1960s and '70s.
In addition to short fiction, Ellison also wrote for the movies and TV, most notably penning "The City on the Edge of Forever" — he was vocal about his dissatisfaction with how his script was rewritten, but the filmed version is still generally considered the finest episode of any Star Trek series.
2) Done, we removed expressions such as "crown eukaryotes" or "three way split" from the current manuscript version, updated Figure 4 (which in the final manuscript version is Figure 3) and rewritten the related text following the line traced by this reviewer and by reviewer 2. 3) Done, the new manuscript version includes and discusses the clan AA topic at the prokaryotic-eukaryotic transition.
Ms. Vanderbilt has already rewritten the ending of "Obsession," and the new version is available as an audiobook recording.
The newest version is an alpha release of Hogwild! which has been rewritten with a focus on performance and maintainability.
In 1999, the bishops approved a rewritten version, which was accepted by the Vatican.
For radio and television, the censored version was heavily rewritten to remove many of the song's references to drugs and sex and was renamed "Purple Hills".
UPDATE 3/24: After multiple court rulings that resulted in a temporary restraining order on his this initiative, the White House rewrote the "travel ban"—and the second version was also temporarily blocked by courts. .
