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The draft outcome document had called for "full transparency" on payments from large corporations to governments.
The draft outcome document takes into account that China, Brazil and India are newcomers to the development debate with their own approaches.
The bulk of the draft outcome document focuses on the achievements and failures of the MDGs to empower women, and what must be done to accelerate progress before the 2015 deadline.
The draft outcome document says: "Public and private investments in innovations and clean technologies will be needed, while keeping in mind that new technologies will not substitute for efforts to reduce waste or efficiently use natural resources".
Both the current pre-summit report and the draft outcome document have grown to about 35 single-spaced pages, turning eight simple targets into a mash of urgent, unmet, and impossible hopes and desires.
But a week ago, the State Department announced that the "document being negotiated has gone from bad to worse, and the current text of the draft outcome document is not salvageable.
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The draft outcomes document circulating before the session even begins by confirming that the UN intends to reaffirm its support for prohibition.
The draft Outcomes Document requests the private sector to reformulate foods and beverages, reduce sugar, salt, and trans-fats, and responsibly market and advertise to children.
The Rio+20 draft outcome document mentions the need to "address the root causes of excessive food price volatility" and manage the risks associated with high and volatile commodity prices for global food security and nutrition and smallholder farmers.
She also criticised vague wording on gender in the Rio+20 draft outcome document.
This target was included in early versions of the FFD3 draft outcome document but was diluted during negotiations.
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