He said they had discussed the idea of charging for entry "many times" but the chapter felt the cathedral was a public place that people should have free access for prayer and worship.
While it's useful to include oppositional work, this chapter feels tacked on.
Towards the end he repeats himself a tiny bit, and the odd chapter feels padded – a couple of pages of reasonably well-known literary pseudonyms here; a couple of pages of name-changing fugitives from justice there.
While his direct experience is clearly pertinent and lends credibility, the interruption into what is, in the main, a third-person narrative with first-person interjection, for example in the Dietrich chapter, feels incongruous.
Characters disappear, conflicts fizzle out rather than come to dramatic conclusions, tales from the old country are told and told again, bits of history are tossed in haphazardly, and a funeral scene in the last chapter feels decidedly tacked on.
Last summer's "Reloaded," the second installment, was overstuffed and ungainly; this concluding chapter feels padded, with a long, grinding battle sequence in the middle and a whole lot of mumbo jumbo at the end.
According to Ross, his chapter feels masculinity is deeply rooted in Delta Lambda Phi's values, and female members would change the club's basic nature.
It seems that the last four years have flown by, and leaving behind our college life to begin our next chapter feels exciting and bittersweet.
It was important that the second chapter felt stylized, almost "too sweet," like it was too good to be true.
It was important that the second chapter felt stylised, almost "too sweet," like it was too good to be true.
