First he took his red pencil to the text, removing infamous phrases such as "baked in that pie".
One can't argue that certain scenes aren't brilliantly realised – for example, one slide summarising some of Lincoln's favourite songs is a wonder of brevity, cutting out cumbersome text, removing the middle man.
In adapting the play, John Logan (who worked on Gladiator and Scorsese's Howard Hughes biography, The Aviator) has sharply cut the text, removing the obscurer passages but retaining its lucidity and eloquence and providing a sharp, graphic narrative.
Chi-square tests for age could not be computed since age < 5 for legal intervention/terrorism has 0 counts, but the text removing this age category had a p value <0.0001.
We also developed summarization methods for aggregating distributed associated text, removing redundant text, and automatically generating a structured text summary for every figure [13], [14].
The representation described earlier in the text removes important information about global location in the brain.
These data, described in a new figure and text, remove potential confounds of recurrent cortical feedback.
These changes included switching the order of text, removing unnecessary text and/or adding in words or phrases to help to clarify the intent of the items.
When referring to specific published texts, remove the superscript, to say for example (Section 4.5): "in the literature, ref 30 amongst others use 1000 null models in their ensembles, whilst ref 12 use…" etc. Figure 4 component parts need labels (A), (B), (C).
