'suggested revision' is correct and usable in written English.
For example, "I have made a suggested revision to the document that should improve its accuracy."
(And a suggested revision to the auteur theory: a director doesn't become truly great until she or he meets the right writer.
Specifically we test three revisions suggested by LeDuc et al. [ 21] regarding the placement of O. orca, G. griseus, and L. albirostris, and a further suggested revision regarding the placement of S. bredanensis [ 24].
I refrained from reading with an eye toward grammatical issues, but I would like to make one suggested revision: "The online platform (www.plantingscience.org) not only eliminates geographic limitations but also makes student thinking visible through its design features, enabling students, teachers and mentors to monitor thinking and learning and to provide feedback".
Some liked the idea, others suggested revisions.
She suggested revisions, and a year later David sent another draft.
Toward the end, on galley 12, I wearily brushed your suggested revisions aside, unable to rise to the occasion and finding my own phrasing more succinct and natural.
His mother, his father, his guidance counselor and his private counselor, with whom his family first started working junior year, had read his essay about his passion for military history and had all suggested revisions.
He did not, like many speed merchants both modern and Victorian, submit first drafts to the printer; he told James Branch Cabell that he had "destroyed all but a few pages" of the first thirty thousand words of "Main Street," and the editor of his first novel, "Our Mr. Wrenn" (1914), marvelled at the ease and good humor with which he executed suggested revisions.
He did not adopt the first of Arnauld's two suggested revisions.
While exonerating the scientists of wrongdoing and endorsing the legitimacy of the consensus opinion, the investigating committees suggested revisions to some scientific practices.
In addition, five graduate students, four of whom had high school teaching experience, reviewed the instrument and suggested revisions to increase content validity.
