Sentence examples for substantive revision from inspiring English sources

But during the team's latest media day, there has been another change, a subtle yet substantive revision.

We will give special attention to the practices of close reading, rhetorical analysis, research, collaboration, and substantive revision.

The course gives special attention to the practices of close reading, rhetorical analysis, research, collaboration, and substantive revision.

Because of its inexpediency, a substantive revision of the electoral law in time for the 2013 elections seems unlikely — despite the fact that a solid majority of Lebanese say they would prefer proportional representation to the current system.

Although the bill, even without modification, may be expected to pass the House, substantive revision may be necessary to garner enough support to pass in the Senate, where procedural measures can be used by the chamber's minority party to hold up legislation.

Put it through several stages of substantive revision and editing.

The most substantive revisions were to the data from the first quarter of 2012.

Two substantive revisions have been made, to South Korea (from 88% to 73%) and to Mexico (from 66% to 79%).

Having shepherded the design through six months of deliberations, the Lower Manhattan Development Corporation has no interest now in substantive revisions.

Jaffe writes in his report that the draft is "an extremely important collection, representing, in effect, the genesis of the novel, with approximately 92 of the 145 pages in this collection bearing substantive revisions by the author".

In turn, those who want the laws changed have funneled their money into Spanish advertisements, in an attempt to keep the governor from winning a rhetorical victory with Latinos without offering what they consider substantive revisions.