Sentence examples for substantial comments and from inspiring English sources

He made substantial comments and revisions to the draft.

GH made substantial comments and contributed to subsequent drafts.

HC provided substantial comments and corrections on the paper.

These themes were analyzed more closely to identify substantial comments and also minor/incidental comments.

OB wrote the first draft, with substantial comments and revisions by the other authors.

JC supervised the thesis and was instrumental in designing the study and guiding the analysis, he made substantial comments and revisions to the draft.

SGB wrote the initial draft and BSK provided substantive comments and substantial editing.

DR was a second author and helped design the instrument, wrote some of the manuscript and made substantial comments in his role as a physician and CAM researcher.

JS and MQ coordinated the field work in terms of study implementation and data collection, and made substantial comments to the manuscript.

MJQ, JM, GA coordinated the field work in terms of study implementation and data collection, designed the study data collection forms, created clinical and laboratory databases, implemented quality assurance procedures, made the statistical analyses, produced the working and final tables and made substantial comments to the manuscript.

WF, H-YL, and MRP made the statistical analyses, and made substantial comments to the manuscript.