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"They referred to the book, or to the author's voice; and they tended to pick out a string of scenes and hope that something inherent in the story would hold it all together.
This is less an in-depth investigation into the Church of Scientology than an entertaining but highly contrived string of scenes featuring Louis Theroux kicking an anthill and then watching the inhabitants react.
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But these emotions seem dutifully inserted into a chock-a-block string of domestic scenes.
But the complicated, quasi-cinematic structure — the play is composed of a long string of brief scenes and images — keeps the various minidramas from being satisfyingly explored.
Verdi's urge to distill operas down to their essence perhaps got the better of him, for "I Masnadieri" emerges as a string of separate scenes without much overall sweep.
The lumbering, old-fashioned drama, without psychology or subtext, presses forward with an air of relentless foreboding before breaking out into a string of horrible scenes (such as the mess Jimmy makes at his sister's wedding or his squandering of the family's insurance policy).
The screenplay, by Seth Bass and Jonathan Tolins, based on a novel by David Gerrold, offers heartwarming, tearjerking, stand-up-and-cheer moments that only a golem could resist, but Meyjes never conjures a world, inner or outer, so the result is just a string of effective scenes, an illustrated script rather than an experience.
The script, by Seth Bass and Jonathan Tolins, based on a novel by David Gerrold, offers irresistibly heartwarming, tear-jerking, stand-up-and-cheer moments, but Meyjes never conjures a world, inner or outer, so the result is just a string of effective scenes.
The screenplay, by Seth Bass and Jonathan Tolins, based on a novel by David Gerrold, offers heartwarming, tear-jerking, stand-up-and-cheer moments that only a golem could resist, but Meyjes never conjures a world, inner or outer, so the result is just a string of effective scenes, an illustrated script rather than an experience.
Director Rourke loads the play's first half with a string of slapstick scenes before events take a tragic turn at the wedding of Claudio (Tom Bateman) and Hero (Sarah MacRae).
We all imagine and we all bullshit but when you do it at a rate that is beyond your control (sans medication) your memories (and thus reality) comes to resemble a string of abstract scenes with your head floating over them, not unlike the truth shattering finale of last year's Twin Peaks: The Return.
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