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One of those inquiries, however, featured a striking description of Zuley.
When Homer first said "rosy-fingered dawn," that was a striking description, but now it's a cliché.
Witty's striking description from 2011 – "a mid-Atlantic floating entity with no allegiance to anybody except the lowest tax rate" – describes today's Pfizer to a tee.
His striking description of a brutal reprisal against an Indian incursion presents an image of entrancement, of near dissociation: "We work in our lather of strange sorrow, but utterly revengeful, fiercely so, soldiers of intentful termination, of total annihilation".
Even when it snows, "the flakes continued at millions of separated points the suppressed gray light of the sky" — a striking description of the strange anticlimax of snowfall in a northern European town.
Among the many marvels, this striking description of how fiction writers condense and transform experience: "We walk through volumes of the unexpressed and like snails leave behind a faint thread excreted out of ourselves".
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Though the novel contains many striking descriptions, the tone is often shrill, and the characters are too transparent to be sympathetic.
It features some of Conrad's most striking descriptions, like this one, of the lady ship: The seas in the dark seemed to rush from all sides to keep her back where she might perish.
Early on in the novel, for instance, there are striking physical descriptions of the beauty of the slaves.
One of the most striking clinical descriptions of an ectoparasite infestation of dogs, cats and rabbits is "walking dandruff", which may be observed on pups with a heavy infestation of Cheyletiella spp. This sign is caused by the movement of these rather large mites under "the bran-like exfoliative debris" [ 20] which occurs as a result of infestation [ 21].
Specific points to be addressed: 1) While the images of this lysosomal network are striking and the description of the dynamics is succinct, there is hardly any quantitative statement in their analyses, or in experimental procedures e.g. unclear how many larvae prep were imaged in each experiment.
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