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The Ted franchise is perhaps unstoppable if MacFarlane sets his sights a bit lower, finds a way to streamline the plot mechanics and just give moviegoers what they never knew they wanted: time hanging out with a foul-mouthed anthropomorphised soft toy.
Jean's main challenge was to streamline the plot and remove the many irrelevant, but highly amusing, tangents that are an iconic feature of Pratchett's work, without destroying the appeal of the books.
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Maybe the crew at Twofour, the British production company that made the show, could teach me something about streamlining the plot and punching up the dramatic bits.
For instance, to show the importance of not overburdening the audience with too many major characters he tells how he went about streamlining the plot of David Baldacci's novel "Absolute Power" by building up the character of Luther Whitney, the master thief, played by Clint Eastwood.
Streamlining the plot and editing would have helped.
It's apparent Anderson wasn't interested in streamlining the plot; he stays almost lock-step faithful to Pynchon's storytelling approach, in which the revolving door of characters often feels secondary to capturing the right psychedelic tone.
The U2 camp said their other commitments had been well known, and that Ms. Taymor resisted efforts to bring in outside help to clarify the plot and streamline the storytelling.
Better still, streamline the sentence.
"We were trying to streamline the process.
Mr. Richter helped streamline the technology.
Then, streamline the data-gathering.
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