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Can the writers really keep this story thread bubbling along for another 14 episodes?
One story thread, for instance, follows a gay man who comes out with dignity, if also with the usual cheap jokes: I'm right with you, someone says, just not behind you.
They look fine -- as do the vivid fight scenes -- but seem to pull "Porgy" out of its dramatic mood, the story thread and its emotional baggage being interrupted if not lost.
The director's superb Watchmen (stop baying at the back there, naysayers) suggests he's more than capable of tying together multiple plot strands without losing the main story thread, yet his new film is still looking remarkably ambitious.
The loggers-v-greenies story thread deals the cast a more difficult hand, as it did in Sheehan's previous Tasmania-set mystery, The Hunter – perhaps because it's tricky to humanise characters whose opposition is so well known that it can stray into caricature and ideology.
The main story thread has reached 80 episodes and counting.
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But there are story threads.
Do all the story threads really make sense or tie up?
At first, he thought that expanding a six-page story to three hundred pages would require writing long story threads.
The story threads history and fiction together, taking readers through different periods in British history – 1910, 1969 and finally 2009.
The writing staff seems to be ditching story threads that didn't work from the first half of season two.
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