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I thought that the comment that I spent two paragraphs on my divorce and a whole chapter on my succession showed a lack of introspection.
The first print ad spent two paragraphs recounting how "the world as we knew it came to a halt" and how the attacks "shook us to our very core".
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But having spent three paragraphs giving you this necessary detail, I must tell you that there is something even more remarkable than the visual allure of the spaceship – and that is the food served within.
After spending two paragraphs debunking "evidence" I'm no closer to the heart of the issue.
For instance, he spends two paragraphs referencing an article in the New York Times critical of exorbitant CEO pay and even quotes an author who says, "The system is pretty much out of control in many ways" -- and himself adds, "That may be true" and writes another paragraph explaining why so.
Why did I spend four paragraphs of this piece on my stories and only one on my novel?
Even more frustrating is that the CDC specifically says "comparisons of the NHBS-MSM datasets collected during 2004 -- 2005 and 2008 should be made cautiously," but Fears spends three paragraphs making lazy comparisons between those two exact studies.
He spends four paragraphs reassuring Susan Patton's son, currently a junior at Princeton, that his dating prospects are as excellent as his mother claimed in her letter, maybe even better.
We know that New Hampshire thinks of itself as a Really Big Deal, by the way, because Gardner spends nine paragraphs explaining the New Hampshire primary's awesomeness before issuing his ultimatum.
One entry spends three paragraphs catching readers up on Britney's legal woes before launching into the importance of keeping financial records organized; another piece that purports to be on Uno, the beagle who won last week's Westminster dog show, morphs into a sermon on the virtues of pet health insurance.
Cohn, racked with guilt and rolling in cash, spent three years laboring on a single paragraph.
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