Sentence examples similar to shortened paragraphs from inspiring English sources
I edited the speech in real time, skipping over a section about my person achievements and, overcome with emotion, shortened a paragraph about dropping out of CAL during the AIDS epidemic.
Therefore, we shortened this paragraph and moved it to the Discussion.
In other words, it was not simply a matter of shortening the paragraph.
The authors should also slightly shorten the paragraph containing the comparison of performances between the crowd and the machine.
Numerous paragraphs have been shortened and tightened.
The Introduction has been shortened as requested, especially the paragraph detailing the role of Th17 cells in the intestinal lamina propria.
I think if it was shortened and had less long descriptive paragraphs then it would be better but I was bored when I read it.
We also shortened and rewrote some of the paragraphs about thermoregulation in Formica rufa group as suggested by the referees to make the main message of the review more clear.
Section was materially shortened through merger of former third and fourth sentences with present first and second paragraphs by extending latter to include "articles, devices, and other things".
As written above in our response to point 4, this section has been shortened and removed from the Discussion, but we have now included some examples of beneficial symbioses to the similar paragraph in the Introduction.
