When Lincoln shared a draft of his first Inaugural Address, Seward suggested a gentler closing and wrote out two sample paragraphs.
Mr. Kennett said that Mr. Perle and Mr. Donnelly had later shared a draft of their op-ed article with Boeing officials and asked them to double-check its facts.
According to the official who shared a draft of a Federal Register notice with the San Francisco Chronicle, DHS intends to push the date the rule would become active into 2018 while it works on withdrawing it in a more permanent way.
Omori shared a draft of the film with composer Makoto Yoshimori so that he could write music to match the tempo.
According to CNN, prosecutors at one point tried to broker a deal where Lewandowski would apologize; the Trump campaign even shared a draft of an apology letter to Aronberg's office.
We shared a draft of the inventory with about a dozen instructors in the UBC science departments, and their feedback was used to refine the wording to improve the clarity.
Sharing a draft of your agenda with coworkers or supervisors and asking for their input can help you fix flaws and add details that overlooked.
"One of us will write the lion's share of a draft on their own and then the other person will come in".
Currently there is an attempt to develop an International Regime on Access and Benefit Sharing with a draft text expected from a working group sometime in 2010.
