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2) The paper goes back and forth between two conclusions: (A) reward affects sensory representations of the stimulus, prior to integration stage (last sentence of Abstract), and (B) reward affects both sensory representation and integration stage (last sentence of introduction).
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I added a few sentences of introduction and conclusion to this section.
This point should be clearly communicated earlier in the Introduction to the study not just as the final sentence of the Introduction.
This failure is signaled in the opening sentence of his introduction: "The poem called 'Beowulf' was composed some time between the middle of the 7th and the end of the 10th century of the first millennium".
Third, Paz-y-Mino and Espinoza refer to the theory of evolution as "Darwinism" (second sentence of the Introduction, p. 655).
As he implies in the second sentence of his introduction, B1, his logoi are designed to be experienced, not just understood, and only those who experience them in their richness will grasp his message.
First, the authors state on several occasions (e.g., initial sentence of the Introduction, p. 655; in questions 1 and 3 of their survey, p. 656; and at the end of their penultimate sentence in the Relevance of this Study section, p. 674) that the theory of evolution provides an explanation for the origin of life.
We have rephrased the first sentence of the Introduction.
I'm confused by the last sentence of the introduction's first paragraph: "there have been no cases reported in Asia".
The authors do cite Raff in the first sentence of their introduction, but should state more clearly in which manner their model was inspired by Raff's hypothesis.
In response we have deleted the last sentence of the Introduction and added a sentence to the end of the first paragraph of the Discussion, in which we cite the Bray and Lay paper.
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