Example of the same sentences edited to sound more intelligent: "Money is obviously important.
My take: There's no question that the sentence, as edited, has a significantly different meaning.
That sentence was edited out of the article — in a routine updating, said Politico — after the blogger Andrew Sullivan highlighted it as a devastating indictment of a Washington media elite too cozy with and protective of its sources to report the unvarnished news.
In sentences I edit, it often takes careful thought to decide just which one of these things the article should say.
Literally translated words and/or sentences were edited into more idiomatic Swedish and words were adapted to fit the Swedish healthcare and county council organization.
The whole thing is a "reinterpretation of Charles Dickens' first serialized novel, The Pickwick Papers," according to the Pckwck site, and watching Cohen's curser spit out sentences feels like editing a Google Doc at the same time as someone endlessly smarter than you.
Records of each sentence can be edited using the curation interface, which allows curators to add a new RIF sentence or modify the content of an existing textual sentence and validate whether the sentence conveys RIF knowledge.
By example, he taught me what it meant to write a good sentence and to edit with a light pencil.
In response to reader comments, the sentence was later edited to read, "British troops left, thousands of Palestinian Arabs fled and Arab armies invaded Israel".
But, no, writing it wasn't very different from editing in that I wrote a sentence and then edited it, wrote a paragraph and then edited it, wrote a chapter and then edited it.
In addition the following sentence has been edited to make clear the CPJ wanted to establish his whereabouts because the organisation was concerned that a journalist had gone missing.
