Sentence examples for sections to be changed from inspiring English sources

On the ones which have, there are handwritten notes on the front, setting out sections to be changed.

1: no consumer choice" section need to be changed as follows.

The binomial test indicated that the amount of detail in the 'Limitations' and 'Linked figures and tables' sections potentially needed to be changed.

2) Figure 1 and 2 do not follow the text presentation and in my opinion would benefit the manuscript and help the reader if Figure 1 was made in sequence of panels: Figure1D, 1A, 1B, Figure 2, 1E Figure 2 should then be the fractionation (current Figure 1 C) and Figure 1 figure supplement 2. The text in the results sections should be changed to reflect this.

The Acknowledgments section should be changed to: This study was funded by Ono Pharmaceutical Co Ltd (Osaka, Japan).

Page 4, Section 3.4 should be changed to "The phylogenic analysis showed over 95% amino acid identity of chitinase chi2 sequence.

Page 4, Section 3.4 should be changed to "Comparison of the chi2 nucleotide sequences from all selected M. anisopliae (GenBank Accession (GBA): KF445078-85) isoriginatinginating from three different parts of Africa showed no differences in the open reading frames composed of 229 amino acid residues.

As described in "Background" section, E can be changed according to the temperature.

The order of summations in section can be changed so that the jth summation with the terms d ij becomes the leftmost summation.

Afterward, two modifications in the geometry were made to see how erosion will be changed in different sections.

Given the suboptimal psychometric properties of section 3 in the Bangladesh field study and the tendency to elicit responses towards high levels of rights awareness in both controls and people with disability, the phrasing of the questions in this sections was changed to "Do people with disability have the right to …?" prior to field testing in Fiji.