44, 164. So in writings, a division, section, paragraph, chapter, etc.: a primo capite legis usque ad extremum, Cic.
Others get their hands dirty with the prose itself, suggesting rewrites at the chapter, section, paragraph, and sentence levels.
3) Results section, paragraph 12, and Figure 7 legend.
These points are discussed in the Discussion section (paragraph three) in the revised manuscript.
Methods section: Paragraph "Computational analyses": The general strategy used here should be made clearer.
'Parkinson's disease' section, paragraph 2, sentence 7, please insert "not" before "results".
Minor things: 'Parkinson's disease' section, paragraph 2, sentence 7, please insert "not" before "results".
The explanation about the influence of NP in the mnRNP preparation was added in the Discussion section (paragraph three).
We have now included a better definition of the inter-motor tension in the modeling section (paragraph 5 of the Results section).
Results section, paragraph four: "This suggests that Hml+Lz+ sessile cells in dorsal clusters divide at an extremely low frequency or are post mitotic cells".
Within the Methods section, paragraph 10 (Trait anxiety), the Cronbach's Alpha for Trait Anxiety should be 0.85 instead of 0.88.
