"second revision" is correct and usable in written English.
You could use it when referring to something that has been revised multiple times, for example: "I have completed the second revision of the paper and sent it off to the publisher."
Second Revision (with E. Satterthwaite) appeared in ALGOL W (Revised), CS 110, 75 pages, October 1968.
Those hanging on may be expecting a second revision from IP before it gives up.
Properties of Inorganic, Substances: a Second Revision and Enlargement of Tables of Properties of over Fifteen Hundred Common Inorganic Substances.
The Office for National Statistics ONSS) will publish its second revision for GDP in the third quarter tomorrow.
First published in 1992, this is the second revision of a book that stands the test of time.
Petty, R. E. et al. International League of Associations for Rheumatology classification of juvenile idiopathic arthritis: second revision, Edmonton, 2001.
This article describes the second revision of Skinware, discussing the differences with respect to the first version.
Mr. Coen's reduced estimate for American ad spending in 2001, made as part of his annual midyear forecast, was his second revision downward in six months.
The second revision of the robot utilized four digital readings, adding wings to place two sensors on the outside of the robot for node detection.
A second revision of the Greek text was made by Theodotion (of unknown origins) late in the 2nd century, though it is not entirely clear whether the Septuagint or some other Greek version underlay his revision.
It plans to release a second revision of the tables in the next year, said Norman M. Green Jr., chairman of the Masters Long Distance Running Committee of USA Track & Field.
