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I just have been unable to combine my literary sense and screenplay structure into a fully winning formula yet.
It is a watchable if faintly baffling movie, never anything other than well acted, conspicuously without allegiance to any conventional three-act screenplay structure.
But the narrative is driven by Skeeter's journey from oddball college graduate to rebellious neo-liberal muckraker, action that happens in the book but is given more prominence in the stripped-down screenplay structure.
Perhaps it is this more complex screenplay structure, or the more assured direction, or the ambition of working on a larger canvas with a more diverse range of characters, but "Sidewalks" is the first of Mr. Burns's films to exceed the promise of his widely praised (and Sundance Film Festival prize-winning) debut in 1995, "The Brothers McMullen".
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The screenplay, structured as a nesting series of flashbacks-within-a-flashback by the screenwriters Harry Brown (the New York poet who wrote "A Walk in the Sun") and Kenneth Gamet, maintains a careful distance from its main character, never even granting a first name to Wayne's Captain Ralls, the skipper of a Dutch trading ship, the Red Witch, plying the South Pacific in the 1860s.
Few of the TV comedy graduates seem familiar with William Goldman's maxim that "screenplay is structure".
Because if screenplays are structure, and they are, then movies are story".
(He also mints aphorisms by the pound: "No one knows anything". "Screenplays are structure").
But when an extra cast member unexpectedly appears, it becomes clearhow much thought Mond has invested in his screenplay, particularly its structure, which is more intelligent than it initially appears.
It's easy to see why Kate Harris would adapt the story of Mr. Caul's awakening conscience for the stage: its theme of diminishing privacy remains relevant, and the screenplay's tight structure, using very few scenes, translates well to the theater.
It is a marvel, particularly its refusal to bend itself into any traditional screenplay-seminar narrative structure.
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