Our experience with NCLB made it clear that a rewrite was needed based on what we have learned about the limits of an approach to school improvement driven by high standards, measured by narrow assessments and provoked by mostly uninteresting, remedial consequences.
However, it was strongly felt that extensive rewriting and presentation is needed to allow the work to be appreciated and understood more widely.
Perhaps a modern rewrite of La Gazza Ladra is needed, too.
As indicated above (comment 10), would the authors agree to rewrite the sentence " Although more research is needed, our results support that rTMS is safe to use in healthy control participants… " and revise the second part of it " … invaluable in assessment of rTMS effects clinically " which to this reviewer is confusing?
But there are indeed other cancers where survival rates have barely shifted, particularly many so-called rare cancers where it is hard to assemble the volume of cases required to run the sort of protocol-compliant clinical trials that would be needed to rewrite the text books.
"The fact is that it is rarely effective to bank unproduced TV scripts, because the staff of writers will be needed to rewrite them during production," they said.
Reporters David Zahniser and Emily Alpert Reyes meticulously documented how more than 100 campaign contributors with direct or indirect ties to Leung gave $600,000 to certain elected officials, whose support was needed to rewrite zoning rules so Leung's $72-million 72-millioncomplex could be built.
I need to add that my own evaluation was not that different from his: Even after all these years, I still have not invested the time that would be needed to rewrite that draft paper and submit it to a journal.
"Some rewriting [of software] may be needed, but how much will depend on changes to the configuration, and we're now studying how to minimize impact on the software.
Several are considering whether legal action may be needed in order to preserve the Hanslope Park archive and to secure access, and some have questioned whether their major works on such subjects as the outbreak of the first world war may need to be rewritten.
