We have reworded this statement.
The expressions included were slightly reworded as statements capable of being used as items in an initial questionnaire.
In the second round, the experts were asked to rate the questionnaire items on a 5-point Likert-scale with a focus on: "How relevant and important are the following to paramedic practice?" The experts were also asked to edit or reword each statement they felt needed revision and provide additional information as appropriate.
It is known that repetition has a powerful effect, though, you shouldn't reword thesis statement.
You can use either a direct quote (i.e. "In a recent interview, Doctor Smith said 'Hats help prevent disease!'"), or reword the statement into the sentence (i.e. "Doctor Smith said that hats are good for people").
The charity promptly reworded it mission statement, replacing "churches" with "congregations". A front-page article on Tuesday about the growth and influence of the Jewish community and other religious faiths in Bentonville, Ark., because of the expansion of Wal-Mart's headquarters there, referred imprecisely to the name of one Christian denomination with several churches in the area.
Update 2: Microsoft has reworded its original statement to "keep things concise" so we've switched the quote below.
We had to reword few statements during the face validity assessment phase but none during the pilot testing phase.
But now, because the passive voice has become a no-no, educators despise Hamlet's favorite verb and cause parents to spend all day thinking about how their students could have reworded their personal statements.
Survey administration did reveal student requests for clarification on one specific item ("I do poorly in math")., so this statement was reworded for clarity ("I make good grades in math").
In the development of CLASS-Chem, 39 of 42 original CLASS-Phys statements were used (37 were kept the same [with "chemistry" replacing "physics"] and two were reworded) and 11 new statements were added.
