Sentence examples for revisions to the draft from inspiring English sources

To prepare the revisions to the draft of the policy, bishops on the ad hoc committee on sexual abuse met some nights in Dallas until 2 a.m. and resumed at 6 a.m.

Several revisions to the draft were subsequently discussed and made in order to meet statutory and policy requirements.

He made substantial comments and revisions to the draft.

RH contributed to the design of the study, data collection and revisions to the draft manuscript.

JH and SR contributed to the data analysis, revisions to the draft and agreed the final version.

MW and TEHH participated in study design, data analysis and interpretation, and contributed critical revisions to the draft manuscript.

MC contributed to the design of the study, performed the statistical analysis and provided revision to the draft manuscript.

DT had the original idea of the paper and undertook revisions to the original draft.

BB designed the study, created the questionnaires and made significant revisions to the first draft of the manuscript.

SR, SM, LO, and SY assisted with selecting and interpreting manuscripts, and made revisions to the manuscript draft.

JAW wrote the draft manuscript and all authors contributed references, comments and revisions to the subsequent drafts.