Sentence examples for revisions to make from inspiring English sources

I do scores of revisions to make them so.

The worst thing is the constant revisions to make it read okay.

In this episode, the election is adapted into a screenplay that needs significant revisions to make it more believable.

It took Sachar several full revisions to make all the strands feel connected, he told me recently.

"I just finished No. 14, 'Playing With Fire," and have a few revisions to make, and then there will be No. 15.

With David Remnick November 4, 2016 In this episode, the election is adapted into a screenplay that needs significant revisions to make it more believable.

The purpose of the cognitive interviews was to get feedback from stable CAD patients in order to make revisions to "Making Choices©" DA content, design, and language.

And now those officials have another revision to make for the year starting July 1.

Is even this too much revision to make on philosophical grounds?

1) The manuscript needs revision to make the presentation more accessible to a general audience.

[Editors' note: the author responses to the re-review follow.] 1) The manuscript needs revision to make the presentation more accessible to a general audience.