Sentence examples for revisions substantially from inspiring English sources

Third, revisions substantially decreased detection of signal peptides whereas there was an increase for the other groups.

JDS supplied failing hearts and helped to draft the revision substantially.

We agree with the reviewers that the presentation of the theoretical model was rather terse and we have in the revision substantially expanded on the details of the theoretical model in the main text, including also the main analytical result illustrated in Figure 4. We also expanded the description of the model in the Materials and methods section.

Due in part to continued growth in the utilization of primary THA, the number of revisions may increase substantially in the coming decades [ 5].

The amount of information available for estimation of a hospital-specific revision risk varies substantially between hospitals.

While disappointing, we hope that this process of revision will have substantially improved the manuscript and make it more likely to find another suitable journal for publication.

Third, risks of revision may be substantially biased (although in certain circumstances, for many analyses the bias of the KM method will be small and the conclusions will not change).

All authors contributed substantially to revisions toward the final manuscript.

QH wrote the first draft of the manuscript and CL contributed substantially to revisions.

All authors contributed substantially to revisions of the manuscript, and read and approved the final version.

This manuscript was drafted by EM with PM and KJB contributing substantially to revisions.