Sentence examples for revisions in the draft from inspiring English sources

"The various revisions in the draft, particularly when studied alongside the other drafts, give us a remarkable insight into how the poet crafts his passionate lament on man's disregard for the sanctity of nature.

AW, CEB, RH, EAF, MM and LF participated in the comparative analysis and in revisions of the draft.

MH participated in technical issues of honeypots and has been involved in the critical revisions of the draft.

In Ukraine, young people's advocacy resulted in the revision of the draft Standards in Education, including the introduction of HIV/AIDS prevention issues into the national curriculum.

HS: Contributed to revisions of the draft survey, involved in collecting results.

AL: Contributed to revisions of the draft survey, involved in collecting results (main contact).

ED: Contributed to revisions of the draft survey, involved in collecting results and commented on drafts of the manuscript.

CW: Contributed to revisions of the draft survey, involved in collecting results and commented on drafts of the manuscript.

With respect to the recommendations for ecotoxicological endpoints for nanomaterials, substantial revisions have been made in the draft documents currently out for consultation [29, 30].

All authors participated in critical revision of the draft manuscript.

All authors participated in the revision of the draft and approved the final manuscript.