SG contributed to protocol revisions and drafted the paper.
After revision, we drafted the final version for the purpose of the study.
TM contributed to the cyber security component of the paper making major revisions and drafting large portions of publication sections related to cyber security.
MG reviewed initial data analysis memos and made substantial revisions to draft versions of the manuscript.
U.S.A.I.D. kept sending parts of it back for revision, draft after draft, weeding out criticism, until the agency finally approved a version for internal use which one member of the team called "a whitewash" of his findings.
Data was collected from their pre- and post-revision drafts, think-aloud protocols during revisions, as well as post-study questionnaires and interviews.
Nearly 4 years later, Environment Protection Law of the People's Republic of China (drafted revision) was passed in April 2014.
Revisions were proposed and drafted during the 3rd and 4th of July, 1776.
BF led the write-up; all authors reviewed and substantively contributed to draft revisions, and approved the draft as submitted.
His books emerged painfully through many revisions, each draft being a way of postponing the final one.
The latest versions of the national curriculum include revisions to drafts that were fiercely criticised when they were published in February.
