Sentence examples for revisions based from inspiring English sources

In comparing between the initial and revised drafts to identify those text revisions based on peer's feedback, Guardado and Shi (2007) found that only 13 out of 22 students revised their drafts, and out of the 13 students, 10 students revised their drafts based on their peers' online feedback, while 3 of them made self-generated revisions.

After a week or so for dialogue and story revisions based on the network's feedback, the SpongeBob team begins to finalize the entire storyboard.

He went to the Embassy with advance tips on his investigation, he shared knowledge about judges' leanings, and he showed Embassy officials drafts of his arrest orders and made revisions based on their comments.

Adding to the indications that the fall in payroll jobs in January could portend worse to come, the bureau issued one of its periodic benchmark revisions, based on more complete data.

Due to improvements we've introduced over time, the monthly revisions (based on additional reports from respondents) are far smaller than they once were.

However, problems are also expected, which require follow-up research and further revisions based on the feedback of the current version.

This process of revision based on appeal must include explicit mechanisms for revising decisions based on emerging issues or arguments.

"It will be subject to revision based on the realities on the ground," General Wardak said.

Kilmartin duly began a revision of his revision, based on the new French text, minus the scholarly apparatus.

It is not a revision based on anything genuine, it is a revision based on Mr Hayes' needs... " The trader wanted a financial reward for altering his forecasts, the jury heard.

The recommendations made public on Tuesday are subject to revision based on public comments and the recommendations of various other state and federal regulatory agencies.